it had better pacing, more directness, less hesitation… the collection of materials feels arbitrary and random, but more clear now. the MC frames a lot the perception of things coming, it heightens certain aspects related to death and destruction.
are we singing the song to each other? are we trying to draw the audience into the song? our different idiosyncrasies come up during the singing and also during the sci-fi-outer-space-film-projections…
what is the mode of communication between us? when do things end or begin, how do we share cues and appointments?
maybe we could clean the space in the end? after a bow? while the audience leaves? before a bow?