* rewrite monologue: shorter text but keeping multiple layers; watch out for how it starts, choose a stronger beginning?

* choose and edit an alternative outer space image – the shape that can play with the planet shape, some sort of similar perspective and depth, but a content more connected to the piece (chairs landscape?). maybe an insert to notice in the zooming in?

* add a dash of colour in the Disney pic

* prepare a new slide show: more images, include more from the process, some blacks in between