too many directions, a bit difficult and confusing as a mix for an (uncontextualized) audience.

the older material (the abstract bare movement research material) had a very immediate quality that now is, paradoxically, gone.

there’s a need to understand the source of the materials in order to grasp them, a necessity for more information. the fact that it is now much more based on concrete actions and tasks demands more sense and clarity in terms of meaning.

cryptic – internal – not communicative enough

you need to step out and kill your darlings. look from outside, go analytical, choose what and how.